SH Fan Fic

[Bob]

Okay, I found the BEST (See: ABSOLUTE WORST) fan fic ever. See, I was looking for that fat turtle monster you referenced in Episode 11 and I saw this link called "Turtles in Silent Hill" or something like that. So I clicked it, only to find the BEST fan fic idea: Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles in Silent Hill!

www.angelfire.com/comics/zaneread/stories/tmnt/silenthill.html

I tried reading it, but it has to be about the worst fan fic ever, just based on structure. Entire paragraphs of different speakers and punctuation that would make your brain rot. I wanted to read more, but it was a chore to skim it, let alone read it, so instead I pass it along to see if any of you care to read it. My favorite part:

< quote > "Since when did YOU start teaching Grammer, Raph?" ,Casey asked. < endquote>

[Fleck]

Man, I love to read this stuff. Really makes me feel better about my own writing.

And when the hell was Casey Jones ever a "a kind-hearted redneck vigilante?" Is there some obscure reboot of TMNT that I'm not aware of?

[countlieberkuhn]

I... can't read that XD

[Fleck]

u cant reed it b/cuz your not goffik enuf.

im goin 2 the MCR concert 2nite. STOP FLAMMING, PREPZ!

[Bob]

This isn't even a PREPZ thing, this is just...gah! Paragraph breaks MIGHT fix 90% of the unreadability, but even aside from that it's disgustingly written.

[countlieberkuhn]

I wonder if 'My Immortal' had a presentable paragraph structure. I highly doubt it, but you never know. It still makes for a highly entertaining fanfic reading though, especially as I would be too lazy to do so myself.